tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37870345.post4487219709919522196..comments2023-03-13T00:53:25.860-07:00Comments on Writer's Wavelength: Cut the Last Line, and Other Lessons in the Short StorySamAhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11957168329971743563noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37870345.post-27838886654155275492012-07-18T14:40:59.919-07:002012-07-18T14:40:59.919-07:00Great post Cindy. It reminds me of our discussions...Great post Cindy. It reminds me of our discussions about active listening in radio drama. You want the audience to create the worlds you are talking about. Make them a part of the process and then they are more immersed in the story. A great lesson for all storytellers. Let the listener in.Samhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17921489094813123307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37870345.post-64666751764904396342012-07-18T08:48:27.243-07:002012-07-18T08:48:27.243-07:00Thanks for the comment. I love it when there'...Thanks for the comment. I love it when there's a clear, simple fix to try that sheds new light on the writing process.Cynthia J. McGeanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00117497921942534828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37870345.post-68549103473596042542012-07-18T08:18:16.710-07:002012-07-18T08:18:16.710-07:00Cut the last line is a magical wonder. I did that ...Cut the last line is a magical wonder. I did that in 5 of my short stories and I was amazed, the meaning was still clear. <br /><br />It's like someone doing something and then saying, "And that's how it's done." :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37870345.post-56156251952187053972012-07-17T13:29:42.621-07:002012-07-17T13:29:42.621-07:00Thank you, Sandra! I am honored to enter your Wri...Thank you, Sandra! I am honored to enter your Writing File.Cynthia J. McGeanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00117497921942534828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37870345.post-91955999970217428312012-07-17T12:19:37.117-07:002012-07-17T12:19:37.117-07:00Excellent analysis, Cindy!Excellent analysis, Cindy!Bloghildehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17869407471488049967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-37870345.post-4535920997724716362012-07-17T11:33:20.493-07:002012-07-17T11:33:20.493-07:00This is perhaps the most concise and best lesson o...This is perhaps the most concise and best lesson on short story writing I've ever had. Kudos, Cindy! This is going in my Writing File.Sandra de Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12511871017361931054noreply@blogger.com